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Do you know
Who I am?
I am Fear,
I am Hate,
I am Lust,
I am Rage.

Let me inside your head.
Let my voice,
Fill you up.
Fill your stomach,
Fill your heart,
Fill your lungs,
Fill your head.
Let me be all that you taste,
All that you hear,
All that you smell,
All that you feel.

Do you know who I am?
I am Addiction,
I am Temptation,
I am vile,
I am Sin.
No,
You can't keep me out.
I am already
Inside your head.
It has been so long! I think I have lost my touch. Hehe! Anyway, please do let me know what you think. Thanks!!
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buslimpan Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student General Artist
This is really good!
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DarkGirlsHope Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Thanks!!
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ChaosIsAwakening Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Writer
I absolutely adore this poem! It's extremely well written, well done!
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DarkGirlsHope Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
Thanks!!
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Professional Writer
That's so much.
I do remember trying to put a hold on all those before... I ended tricking myself and going off badly.

But I would still ask... is it right to acknowledge their strength over us without any effort to put all such sins of humanity under any restraint?
I did find my answer ^_^
and that answer was another sentiment I added to those you wrote above. That sentiment is "faith"
Thank you for allowing me to share what I think ^_^
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DarkGirlsHope Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
That's always the hardest thing to do. Not giving in, I mean. So here is what I do when the... temptation... becomes overwhelming: Go into an empty room, breathe, and write. That always works me. After all, a pen can be a mighty weapon ^_^
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Whisperer-of-Winds Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Professional Writer
It so happens that it works for me as well ^_^
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DarkGirlsHope Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014
:heart:
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